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The Lonely Feather by ~Raphel:iconRaphel:



The Lonely Feather

The lonely feather, stained crimson red,
Drifted gently down in the vast space of the church
One little thing in a mass of once-been splendour
Hovering over the organ
Where a hollow skeleton played its empty tune

Red, the fires of Hell
Home of the eternally damned
Broken remnants of the once-beautiful glass
Shines down upon the feather, whose own red is momentarily forgotten

Now it drifts into the blue and green
Peaceful shades to sofen the blood-stained feather
Fragments of the Virgin Mary holds out her hand
Forgiveness, peace, love
What the feather once knew

As it floats in and around the pews,
Desparate souls reach out
Wanting to clasp a relic of their faith
But the feather brushed past them all
Landing on the tattered altar cloth
Awaiting its owner
Perhaps forever
The lonely feather, stained crimson red.
©2003-2008 ~Raphel
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Submitted: October 2, 2003
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This is a piece that I did while observing the peace and surreal images in a church. I would appreciate comments or feedback.
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~Koukris:iconKoukris: Oct 2, 2003, 3:45:51 PM
Wow!!! Raphel, where've you been? This is a fabuloustically written poem!!! Great job, as usual!!!

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i'm a chooga chooga chooga chooga chooga chooga I'M A TREEEE!!! a chooga chooga chooga chooga chooga TREE!!! look at him, look at her, look at me, chooga chooga chooga chooga tree!
~KachinaPrisma:iconKachinaPrisma: Oct 2, 2003, 4:21:19 PM
RAPHEL! That is so beautiful! You're poems are far beyond anything I can write! *wipes tears of awe away* I would never be able to put words like that to express so much meaning and feeling! Beautiful work, beautiful! *applauds* :D
~blackcat1333:iconblackcat1333: Oct 2, 2003, 7:23:25 PM
It's good to see you back my friend... your poems are amazing, beautiful, wonderful as always. Keep up the work and share new poems with us often!
~Raphel:iconRaphel: Oct 3, 2003, 5:05:38 PM
Thank you and I will!

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The only way to reach salvation is to be open-minded to those around us which are different.
~Raphel:iconRaphel: Oct 3, 2003, 5:06:36 PM
Thank you very much. I am so glad that you enjoy reading my poetry. Thank you for the favorite!

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The only way to reach salvation is to be open-minded to those around us which are different.
~Raphel:iconRaphel: Oct 3, 2003, 5:07:05 PM
Thank you.

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The only way to reach salvation is to be open-minded to those around us which are different.
~Koukris:iconKoukris: Oct 3, 2003, 5:11:09 PM
You're welcome!!! :D

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i'm a chooga chooga chooga chooga chooga chooga I'M A TREEEE!!! a chooga chooga chooga chooga chooga TREE!!! look at him, look at her, look at me, chooga chooga chooga chooga tree!
~KachinaPrisma:iconKachinaPrisma: Oct 3, 2003, 10:11:13 PM
It's a great poem, I had to favorite! :D
~Raphel:iconRaphel: Oct 4, 2003, 5:04:44 AM
Thank you so much!

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The only way to reach salvation is to be open-minded to those around us which are different.